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life 1 min read 471 views Oct 8, 2016

CONFRONTATION relationship issues

Careful, the naked woman

in the bathroom mirror

stands behind you

as if she has something in her hands 

she finds difficult to show you.

Does she want to turn you to yourself?

But what would you find that you do not want to know?

Or is she about to suggest again a couple months separation? 

That 3-day no speaking moratorium did neither of you any good.

No, you don't look at yourself

only at her through the mirror.

Careful, do not ask the mystery

of her distant downcast eyes.

Ah, just as you are about to

snap off the lights to end

this little scene

she holds up the busted TROJAN!

 

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after vision

my poet, eighteen years and 9 months

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lovelylady1

OMG! I held my breath while reading this piece! Talk about a climax! Great way to keep the reader captivated my king!

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