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life 1 min read 689 views Oct 11, 2016

In The Garden of War

In The Garden of War

 

Satan—

Disguised cherub

Stole into the garden

 

The hawk

Devoured the dove

 

Same wing—

Different feathers

 

Are we not

Just a variation

 

Same is the saying—

Early worms get caught

Least sleeping birds arise late

 

May tomorrow dawn

Resurrection of the doves

 

May the true cherubs

Arise and soar

 

May the wings of hawks

Become featherless.

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after vision

an interesting way to look at this my poet

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after vision, as always, much appreciation for the feedback. How ironic it is that we often ignore the same on the Mother Continent. Colonialism/Neo-Colonialism: vague variations. War is war! Much Peace and Love, my Brother. mlowe5.

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