“Passion And Ambition Seek The Same”

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romance 1 min read 416 views Oct 18, 2016

In The Thick Of Hair

She placed me on top of her head as if I were some type of hat. Sticking my head out ever so often, I Rested comfortably in the wool combs of her hair. Never before have I been able to breathe so freely. My feet massaging her scalp. In my honest opinion, I explored a sensitivity I knew nothing about. Laying in a field of hair. Dark brown roots,wrapping my finger around natural brown curls. I wanted to know why she never shared this with anyone else. Hearing my echo come back to me in complete silence. Something seen out right, a wool ornament seen in the fall. Hanging across the greatest joy shared between us two. Finding home in the follicles of her hair

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That sometimes happens. Reminds me of a poem I wrote once about reading the newspaper under my girlfriend's skirt. You know, with all the bad news you gotta have something good to look up to. Right?

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