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life 2 min read 701 views Oct 29, 2016

Revelation


Something deep inside of me asked why do I continue to lie to me? If I don't disclose the root of the problem. I'll never know how good true love can be. So I drafted a disclosure at the same time lacking composure. Played my own witness, lawyer, judge and jury. Who else better to witness what others may not see!
I feel stuck in a time capsule as emotions unravel. I can't possibly be the only one left walking a distance meant for two. Pay attention; it may end up you!

Once again I envision a life of a life-like prism. I thought I was freeing the heart of a soul. But instead I was just left with feelings caged in. I need therapy! And not just for me! Inconsiderate minds say just cheat; life. I feel ruined! The heart of a giver just misconstrued in; Quaint quotations an aspirations left on Lover's domains. I figured to heal my growth forward is to never complain! As the absence of evidence is irrelevant in this case. Never having loss of Love is never knowing what Love is in the first place. Hear me convince myself as I write this in my timeline as instruction to save face!

 

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Lovelylady1

My dear king "I can't possibly be the only one left walking a distance meant for two" really touched me. As crowded as it is on this side of life, its still feel very lonely at times! OK, now I want to cry! Great write!

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TimChronicle

Yes yes my Beauticul Queen; that road can be a tough one! Just remember; your tears are also mine! Thankyou for the comments as always!

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after vision

my poet you have the baggage of one twice your age. stay the course and continue to write the heart of your passings

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LP45

Tim, this was an excellent write. A "revelation" I can definitely relate to. Sometimes that road seems never ending. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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