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romance 2 min read 438 views Nov 10, 2016

Rose

I was once your everything  shinning with the sun, that glimmer of happiness you never showed anyone

I was watered with affection, and buried with your company 

you showed me what it was like  to feel when you have someone who cares come for me  

everyday you would look , smile , laugh ,talk and sometimes cry. might I add but only for a little while because we always got by

minutes went to hours, hours goes to days, still you showed me what it was like to be filled with your loves rays 

months into years, now  we are here, that once glimmer of happiness is long but gone and this is my fear

you would check me once a week , with  average attention, I was starting to fall off and never knew the intentions 
you no longer smiled and no longer laughed just sad faces and frustration is what shaded our path

time goes on and I realize your gone, I see where I once was and where I am now and thats looking up  to a black mass

I finally realized I was but a petal on a flower in which I had wilted.  Our friendship and future that we had wasn't  going to last 

Now I'm on the ground and i see  the whole view , I was just a rose petal in a rose bush for you .

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Crieone

It is better to be recycled in nature than to be burried in a landfill. She loved you, she loved you not. A man will be alright.

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LP45

Beautifully scribed.Love takes us down paths we won't always see. Thank you for sharing. Some never miss the water till the well runs dry.

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after vision

my poet when you close your eyes and fly through love you often find yourself alone and tired - thanks for sharing

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