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life 2 min read 711 views Nov 11, 2016

Friendzone

 

Im stuck in this room

No windows, no doors that I can see, not even a broom. 

Its hot as hell and I just want to go home. 

But im stuck here, in this got damn friendzone. 

A place thats so dang hot, yet so cold

And a story way too familiar and yet so old. 

You know how it goes. 

A brotha finally finds a dope as girl that he dont have to worry about if she a hoe. 

Ask her out on a date, she says yes and you been waiting to date her

And then she says, "I think we should be friends" a few dates later

Like f*ck. Why me Lord?

I found a girl that was perfect and had a weak at the knees Lord. 

We had so much in common and things was going good

She's a really dope person, lovely to look at and even likes the same food. 

She got goals in life and a good head on her shoulders

And all a brotha wanted to do was keep her close and hold her. 

Talk about life and things of that nature. 

Hell, you even feel like there's nothing or nobody in this world that could make you hate her

But nah. Im stuck..... in this got damn friendzone

No doors or windows to climb out of so a brotha can go home. 

All I got is time and space. 

I wonder if I'll ever get out of this place. 

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2b2b2

Tight Work....well played....ONE

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after vision

my poet, stay in that zone until she is forced to see you through the eyes of love

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RonnieL

Dope scribe!

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LP45

Nice write. Sometimes it takes some longer to see the good that they're missing out on. Have faith. Thank you for sharing.

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