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HymnAgen
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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Pledge of Lies

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One nation,

 

under God,

 

indivisible…

 

Hmmph…

 

but on the street

we treat each other

like the other

is invisible.

 

We don’t speak.

 

Our eyes don’t meet

with intention.

 

When they accidently do,

it’s awkwardly,

 

because your penchant

to smile uncomfortably

attempting to appease

some violent rage –

as if some beast

loosed from its cage

resides in me –

 

CREATES very the rage

you behave as if exists

within my heart at all times.

So, why shouldn’t I be pissed

when your eyes

are passing judgment,

and your deportment

convicts?

When you shun your own

for confirming your privilege

does exist?

Your pledge is a lie.

We are, in deed,

two nations.

 

-HymnAgen

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Very true write Hymnagen but I honestly believe their really is a different spirit beginning with Thanksgiving through Xmas people look at you smile when you pass them on the street but the day after Xmas it resorts back to just what your poetry says
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2b2b2 says:

Excellent Write....yes indeed, it is intended and carefully constituted that way.....thanks for sharing....ONE

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Ezell-Dazh says:

Indivisible truth

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LUV

 

after vision says:

my poet, you speak to the soul from the soul of the old and wise

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hymnagen says:

mrmelody7, I respectfully disagree. If it only shows under certain circumstances, it doesn't come from a real and sincere place, but that's just my opinion, brotha. I always appreciate your time, poet.
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hymnagen says:

2b2b2, Ezell-Dazh, after vision: just penning my reality. thanks for riding with me
 

catmartan says:

Powerful I Agree

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hymnagen says:

Manythank catmartan!

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