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life 1 min read 739 views Nov 11, 2016

Pledge of Lies

One nation,

 

under God,

 

indivisible…

 

Hmmph…

 

but on the street

we treat each other

like the other

is invisible.

 

We don’t speak.

 

Our eyes don’t meet

with intention.

 

When they accidently do,

it’s awkwardly,

 

because your penchant

to smile uncomfortably

attempting to appease

some violent rage –

as if some beast

loosed from its cage

resides in me –

 

CREATES very the rage

you behave as if exists

within my heart at all times.

So, why shouldn’t I be pissed

when your eyes

are passing judgment,

and your deportment

convicts?

When you shun your own

for confirming your privilege

does exist?

Your pledge is a lie.

We are, in deed,

two nations.

 

-HymnAgen

 

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mrmelody7

Very true write Hymnagen but I honestly believe their really is a different spirit beginning with Thanksgiving through Xmas people look at you smile when you pass them on the street but the day after Xmas it resorts back to just what your poetry says

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2b2b2

Excellent Write....yes indeed, it is intended and carefully constituted that way.....thanks for sharing....ONE

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Ezell-Dazh

Indivisible truth

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after vision

my poet, you speak to the soul from the soul of the old and wise

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hymnagen

mrmelody7, I respectfully disagree. If it only shows under certain circumstances, it doesn't come from a real and sincere place, but that's just my opinion, brotha. I always appreciate your time, poet.

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hymnagen

2b2b2, Ezell-Dazh, after vision: just penning my reality. thanks for riding with me

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catmartan

Powerful I Agree

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hymnagen

Manythank catmartan!

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ThePoetess

you had me at the first two stanzas! love the flow of words, nice Ink!

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