Can't rewrite the realist $#!+ I ever wrote
So I wrote this tight new rhyme right,
On a certain website at 11:30 last night,
It wasn't perfect, so I changed some stuff,
Like a barber edging lines for too long, I really messed it up,
I knew that time wouldn't be kind,
My words grew out awkward like a jacked up hairline,
Trimming thoughts past the point of no return,
Going from Drake to George Jefferson was cause for concern,
Hours passed but it was nearly perfect,
Then I hit submit and the internet just murked it!
I hit the back button,
Hoping to salvage something,
But it was long gone, up in smoke,
I couldn't rewrite realist $#!+ I ever wrote.



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Did you recover any of it? Technology! A blessing and a curse.
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my poet, you are not alone. some of my best sh#t is in cyber no where. thanks for letting me know that I am not alone
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LOL....Been there! Creative and humours scribe!
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Nice flow nosajm, Hope you were able to recover your work. Thanks for sharing.
Read LP45's poemsWarriorCarryingWater

Thanks all!
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