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life 1 min read 708 views Dec 12, 2016

Philly in Winter

Cold metallic air seeps under a cracked single pane window. Lying beneath a square portal, struggling to Breath winters steely  breath. In nighttime the cold brings stillness to pavement aggressions, freezes venal vendettas into mannequins frozen under ice. Cold northern air antiseptic to lungs. Laying under a window pane observatory listening for signals of life in a city under arctic stasis. Staccato pops of .22 automatics call out. Ominous booms of Mossberg pumps reply... Pensive yelps of stray dogs searching for warmth. The low hum of progress muffled. A single star occupies my single pane window. Invaded by creeping frost.. A city under ice...

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Ezell-Dazh

Heartfelt elegance...May that single star ignite the fire that melts the freeze.

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Coalhouse

Mad respect for shout out!

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RonnieL

Dam Coalhouse! Another one! I could visualize your words. Imagery profound. Much respect to your talents.

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Coalhouse

Staying down baby..

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love_supreme

Very nice

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