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"Heart Drips"

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Sitting by the fireplace listening to the crackling sound of the fire

I reminisce on the first day the way my eyes connected to yours on our first date by the lake

we held in the fresh clean air through our noses

with our eyes closed holding hands we wonder where will our love go who knows?

hugging one another tight the love in our hearts drips drop by drop landing inside an invisible pot

you tell your love “my heart drips for you for the rest of our lives we know it’s true”

he holds your cheek in the palm of his hand and kiss your cheek and say “ united we stand” yes we not engaged yet ,but I will make an oath and promise to always remain your man

they way we love we can form a river sail our own boat from coast to coast”

“ I’m not afraid to cry and say today “will you be my wife? Jesus whispered to me it’s time”

“make my night so it can shine like Jesus light”

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after vision says:

my poet you stole me at the crackling of the wood
 

tiffanyr says:

I'm honored that I stole you right at the beginning :)

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amin901 says:

Unique style.Very Poetic.
 

tiffanyr says:

Thanks amin901

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