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life 1 min read 512 views Dec 21, 2016

I am

I am

drowning in a sea of unknowingness

The future... I'm afraid I'm not sure what it holds

will I stand up to the pressures or just.. fold

I am

stuck in this abyss of eternal darkness

floating with no direction or cause

Please someone save me I have no clue at all

what I am doing .....where I am going

 I'm drowning in my own world of confusion and uncertainty

Life has me rattled, afraid at the top of a ledge

Body free, hands out toes kissing the edge

What is beyond?

I am

Drowning in a sea of unknowingness.

 

 

 

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alexiscoon4135

I completely relate to this post. Face the future head on. Don't be afraid to make mistakes. the more you make, the more rewarding the journey. Don't worry about the things you cannot change. Just tackle each moment of each day my poet <3

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