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inpsirational 2 min read 747 views Jan 6, 2017

The Man

The man is not black he is bruised. He isn't lazy he's just little down, from being used. Dont get  beside yourself and judge his ways. Because his character may seem somewhat peculiar. Because his vision seem little far off. I place blame, on the flaw, of the system and since the laws are staked up against him, he has to live in a unhealthy condition.  If you try to get inside his head, you will find yourself lost inside his heart and it may be hard to try to get out.  He is a good man but little complex, as he has to measure  every little steps. He dosen't want what is rightfully yours. He only wants what he is capable of building.  He dosen't need you to give him a chance, his heart''s desire is to be his own man. So, its time for you step to the side and allow the first man to enjoy his pride; as you know, its the only the left, so let the first Man redeem himself, I believe, you should want to do right. I hope to God you can you see his light. I pray to God that you can grasp his plight. I need you to see that the Man is human, so dont view him as a natural born looser. As I said the Man is a Hue-Man. 

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hymnagen

Very encouraging piece!

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SYQ222

Thank you. I love my brothers.

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zhonnny

Yo! I love this piece. It gives me peace. Keep writing, queen.

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SYQ222

Thank you Queen!!

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