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romance 1 min read 829 views Jan 8, 2017

But Yet, So Far

It pains a man

to want

what he can’t have.

To reach

what he can’t grasp.

To smell

what he can’t taste.

To gaze upon a face

that adores him,

but implores him

not to press

the way her memory of him

against her flesh

makes her give in

to errant thoughts

of would have,

should have,

could have beens….

 

- HymnAgen

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SYQ222

Beautiful and truth!!

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2b2b2

Potent Capture brah...good to read ya...ONE

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RonnieL

Beautifully played! Feelin this one!

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Corey

I felt such sadness and longing between the lines and it reminded me of a time in the past. Beautifully done!

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Kingqadardwon'

Awesome write bro!!! Definitely feeling this write..

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LP45

Powerful write you got going on here. Thank you for sharing this.

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hymnagen

Thank you all for these uplifting comments. They are most definitely appreciated.

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