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romance 2 min read 456 views Jan 31, 2017

Surprise Me

Sweet little notes hidden around the room,
Nice gestures that are coming from you.
Show me I matter and be romantic,
Step out your comfort zone, don’t be ok to take it.
Take the time and enlighten me,
I just want to feel loved, that’s not hard to see.
Want to feel like you had a thought,
Want to feel like for my love you fought.
A single beautiful rose with a love note written,
A nice heartfelt card that will have me smitten.
I know you love me and yes it shows,
But can I get a moment? Can you let me know?
I want to experience that feeling that I will get from you,
Want a keepsake, a memory…….something to debut.
It’s not about material things, but they will definitely do.
Its nice little things that matter to a person,
The thrill of a surprise is what you should immerse in.
I love my boyfriend and I feel he loves me.
But why do I find myself having insecurities?
I’m 25 years old, never had real love,
In these situations, I’m a baby cub.
Looking for nurture and something concrete,
Wanting acceptance from the person I want to keep.
Surprise me with whatever I wouldn’t care,
The thrill of the surprise is what I wish to bare.
I’m not asking you to spend money, I’m not asking you to go broke.
I’m just asking that you at least put in some work!

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