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life 1 min read 284 views Mar 21, 2017

im on layaway

I'm on layaway Girl he finally proposed When is the wedding day No one knows I'm doing all the things a wife would do But my wedding day I don't have a clue I'm ask him and he says just be still But on the inside I feel this enormous chill That my special day will never come So now I feel stupid and dumb I'm so lost without any more words to say I have to realize that he only gave me the ring to keep me on layaway Written by Marvin Crutchfield aka Mr poetry

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