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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I see you watching while I create you look hungry so make a plate while you're sleeping I stay up late the cable went out it must be raining I hear all the neighbors complaining every bump every knock and every whatnot falling someone screaming for help by the elevator but no one comes in time to save her some tired others lazy someone close to me just had another baby looking into the eyes of the buddle of joy nothing but tears why are you here if you knew like I know it's going to be a hard way to go grow up fast coz, your parents are little slow directing my attention to the little feet and tiny toes all the crying an runny nose trying to latch onto what it knows to feed on don't know if I'll be around long enough to give you a shoulder to lean on but as long as you can, just hold on

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RonnieL says:

I Love Visualizations....man, the imagery that you created with words in this piece....FLAWLESS. EYE could see this scene like I was there. Dope

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love_supreme says:

Another one. Excellent write.

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