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first love 1 min read 518 views Mar 20, 2018

Venus

She was herself...

Dancing in the misery he created..

Creating dance moves

From her experience being alienated.

She loved him..

Even though his Rose was black..

She loved the boy,

Despite his innate ability to

Turn his back.

Yet

He loved her

But his love would never grow

She loved with action,

With passion...

And he was typing back slow...

She was,

A woman,

Impeccably created

With the breath of a million Gods.

Skin impenetrable..

The very pinnacle..

Still loving against the odds

Equipped with the heart who birthed

The Goddess of Love..

Her power was so strong..

She taught the God of War,

How to Love.

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Jazzjonnae

Beautifully said.

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LP45

Nice!! Excellent write and dope flow. Thank you for sharing this.

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Coalhouse

Nice piece

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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