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I won't give up on you

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I watched you die a long time ago

there was no funeral or burial, just

Burnett vodka bottles and the smell of cigarettes

I tried to save you but my all of my efforts were rejected

Everyone said that I was wasting my time, they said you were too far gone

I nearly killed myself trying to resuscitate you

I almost gave up but just when I was about to accept defeat..

you looked at me, your eyes were weak and your breathing was shallow 

but i could tell that you were happy that I was still around

So I’ll stay as long as you need me

 

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