“UNDER CONSTRUCTION”

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romance 2 min read 537 views Oct 15, 2018

blindSIGHT

She cared for me like I cared for material things

Still she cared for me

I cared for her but I loved my dreams more

still she cared for me

Our feelings grew as we fused like siamese

Still she cared for me

At the time her deeds went unnoticed yet

She still cared for me I wasn’t prepared for the gift I was given yet

She still cared for me

She wasn’t happy with the life I was living yet

She still cared for me

Yes she cared for me until it was too much for my insecurities the impurities of my personality didn’t agree with her mentality I couldn’t see beyond my insanity maybe it was my vanity that was in the way me living happily ever after even after I eventually severed what would be the most important piece of extending my family tree I then realized she cared for me now as time passes and I understand the responsibilities of being a man I reach back into my memories for a familiar hand only to notice that shes different however I felt the presence of my former self in her the woman I once loved now an empty shell of stolen innocence the essence of my intolerance -

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