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The veiw

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I need to veiw it all from the top

 So I apologize but I just can't stop

I must continue to climb

With callused palms And aching feet

I continue to climb

Because I cannot accept defeat

I gotta see all the hidden things

I couldn't see on the ground

But I imagine what's up above

Is an amazing sight to see

Being on top

I'm sure I'll be astounded

By everything God willed just for me 

And everything around it

When I get up there it'll reveal the painting

Of who I was created to be

So I'll climb and climb

Until I bleed

Because the veiw from the top

Is simply what I need

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TEEDUB815 says:

Good Writing

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gmcgee325 says:

TEEDUB815 thanks for your support ❤️

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mrmelody7 says:

Blessed to follow Gods predained destiny for you
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mlowe5 says:

Such is the nature of the view of the "Burning Bush" from the top. May you continue to be a sharing enlightenment. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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2b2b2 says:

AMEN....ya gotta look to see....ONE

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