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romance 1 min read 571 views May 2, 2019

Unveiled Love

You opened up the most vulnerable part of me.

The part of me I rarely allow anyone to see.

You entered my most sacred space.

Part of me felt comfortable, part of me felt out of place.

You unrobed my weakness.

Speaking words to my soul that left me speechless.

You sailed upon the uncharted parts of my ocean.

Slowly revealing what was hidden in my emotions.

I stood there naked and exposed.

Baring all my scars from past hurt and pain.

You saw the real me.

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Charles2

Most excellent rendering of undiluted truth... baring the all ...of your inner stellar energy...

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Inkthatspeaks

Yes...Thank you my fellow poet!

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Poetic08'

Let me first say, I know it took a lot to share this part of you. But it only a testament of a Queen with a soul.

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours. The unveiling of ourselves by another and self discovery through our own introspection are two of the most wonderful things that can happen to any human being. When all the complex layers of ourselves are stripped away...that's when we finally find out who we are...Respect...

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Inkthatspeaks

Thank you so much my fellow poets. You guys rock!

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I like this poem.

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