A Chilly Rainy Afternoon
In the chill of the afternoon
the light rain steadily fell—
soaking the rich green field
Just as the rain tapered off
to a slight mist, a flock of blackbirds
swooped down, ambushing
thirsty unaware frolicking worms
With the lapse of time, the rain ceased
and the blackbirds departed—
leaving a lone squirrel undulating across
the watery green field.

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Very scenic poem brings back when stationed in Augusta Ga rainy night in Ga Brook Benton this particular night it was raining sounded so sad yet so beautiful
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Indeed, "...so sad...[and]...so beautiful." Thanks for the read and feedback mrmelody7. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Thanks, love_supreme. Peace and Love.
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Sometimes the universe casts moments of great beauty to astound us in so many ways, all spontaneously in parallels we cannot imagine, yet experience naturally. Serendipity
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