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A Chilly Rainy Afternoon

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In the chill of the afternoon

the light rain steadily fell—

soaking the rich green field

 

Just as the rain tapered off

to a slight mist, a flock of blackbirds

swooped down, ambushing

thirsty unaware frolicking worms

 

With the lapse of time, the rain ceased

and the blackbirds departed—

leaving a lone squirrel undulating across

the watery green field.

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mrmelody7 says:

Very scenic poem brings back when stationed in Augusta Ga rainy night in Ga Brook Benton this particular night it was raining sounded so sad yet so beautiful
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, "...so sad...[and]...so beautiful." Thanks for the read and feedback mrmelody7. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, love_supreme. Peace and Love.

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