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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I  gave it all
what did I give
I gave my love
I gave my likes
I gave my shares
I stood up I gave my chair
I gave my attention
paid my fare I gave my life
to get to get it back
I gave my loyalty
to get stabbed in the back
I gave my honesty
in return she lied to me
I gave so much
nothing belongs to me
no attachments no
fatal attractions
I gave my blood to
who I love one who
has no sympathy
seeing me
sitting on empty
I gave into needing
acceptance
I gave into wanting
to be loved
I gave into loneliness
I gave into trying to
please others
I gave into believing
stuff that didn't serve me
I gave and gave into
a lot of things but I
did not give up on me

 

 

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LEEPAUL says:

Never!!!
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mlowe5 says:

So Mote it be. And know that the Giver of all Good Gifts and Graces, will never give up on you. Enjoyed the write and its journey. Thanks for sharing . Peace and Love, mlowe.
 

Chris says:

Those who does not see the kind in you, Knows nothing, but sh%t. Save you. My grandmother would've called you, "Brave One"
 

Karma says:

I Like this Write Poet. To End this with the Line, " I Did Not Give Up in Me"... #CLASSIC. Now, Imagine What You'll Give for the One that Deserves it... Good Poem!

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