JustGreylon
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just different
Candle light,
moon beams
peaked through
the window shutter.
She laid naked,
zebra laced
like a safari
uncovered.
Her body buttered,
lustered the night
while she slept quietly
through the down pour.
He watched drawn,
reefer smells dwindled
under her loud fragrance
til he could bare no more.
-Jg
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COMMENTS
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mlowe5 says: Insightful awareness filled with beautiful imaging allegorical messaging. Peace and Love, mlowe5. |
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J.J.Oxtail says: Reminds me of intimate nights where I have fallen asleep before my partner. Is this what it's like? Is the question that's running through my head. This was an interesting read. |
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bragee says: great imagery associated with the after moments of an intimate night! Good stuff poet |
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JustGreylon says: @ J.J exactly like that. |
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JustGreylon says: Thanks fellas for the input! Input keeps me motivated to give my readers more. |
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