a moment of desired pleasure carryover to undesirable feelings that's a side effect is it really worth it are the consequences enough to abort mission or is life more exciting living on death wishes is the pill worth the pain in the aftermath is it normal to cry after the laugh to ease the discomfort of the disease disabling abilities to overcome unwanted humility the gutters deep enough to drown in on a rainy day still it's a good time to get tears out the way it's like taking medicine to get a feeling then spiraling out of control trying to hold on to the soul fleeing the scene of the accident
The Immortal Wize
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mlowe5 says: Nice write. It's important as we sojourn, to pull into "rest stops", releave self, contemplate the moment, assess accidents, restore strength and leave at get back to mission-purpose. We are not God; just his human servants, serving Him by being in and of service to our fellow beings. Peace and Love, mlowe5. |
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LP45 says: Great write Wize. We have to remind ourselves to think before we act by stepping back and assessing what we're doing before going through with it. Thank you for sharing this great piece. Peace and blessings. |
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mrmelody7 says: Poet Wize the prolific one all ways a pleasurable journey n your writes |
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