I TRIED TO WARN YOU
BUT YOU DID NOT LISTEN
A PUDDLE OF WATER
THAT SHINES AND GLISTENS
YOU’RE MOVING TO FAST
TO NOTICE YOUR DIRECTION
THERE’S A STORM UP AHEAD
A HURRICANE JUST TORE THROUGH
YOUR WINDOWPANE
THAT SENT YOU FLYING
IN PAIN
AND ALL YOU HAD TO SAY
IT LOOKS LIKE RAIN
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2b2b2 says: Powerful Petit Piece....thanks for sharing....ONE |
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mlowe5 says: Wow! Breadcrumbs2021, it's beginning to look like rain in the flow of a thunderstorm. Thanks again. Love the metaphoric wordp[lay. Peace and Love. |
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