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romance 1 min read 591 views Jan 17, 2022

Superman

Stop 

Wait

Let me put on my cape

I’m not

That great 

I just said it for your sake

As I 

Save you 

You keep running toward wealth

But why

When I knew

You don’t care care about our health 

Stressing 

Over lessons

That I’ve already learned

And resting

On bridges

That should have long burned

But if I

Set it to flame

You wouldn’t be able to escape

And I’d fly

Home in shame

To go and get my cape

 

 

 

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The Immortal Wize

Phenomenal!

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Sonofsun5211

I was actually in a bad accident recently...broke my neck back got a concussion and brain damage and a bunch of other injuries... I’m just glad to still have my greatest gift...

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Sonofsun5211

I was actually in a bad accident recently...broke my neck back got a concussion and brain damage and a bunch of other injuries... I’m just glad to still have my greatest gift...

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Excellent write

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