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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I'm strong enough

to do the legwork

to build a dream home

but I cannot raise the walls

alone without struggling to

lift it up without it fallen on

me I can't dig myself out from

underneath I need you there

to lift the pain up off of me

keep me awake incase I start

to fall off to sleep on the job

because I might not want to

wake I need to complete

the task at hand without

fail its in my grasp grab a

hammer help me pound

some nails and saw some

wood do not leave the site

before the foundation dries

underneath your feet you

don't want to get stuck in

the floor at least give me

enough time to frame a door

you gone need something to

close and lock behind you

to remind you of the drawing

of the blueprint floor plan the

relationship between rooms the

partnership you left behind you

 

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mlowe5 says:

A deep allegorical message. Love the rhythmic metaphoric flow and word play. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.
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Coalhouse says:

Dope

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Coalhouse says:

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