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Idolatry

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the Mouseketeers...
the Andersons...
the Nelsons...
his Three Sons
their friends and classmates...
their neighborhood
their state
their country

Jesus!

the whole damned world!
the whole damned universe!

so
where were we?
weren't we there in prehistoric times living down the block from the Flintstones?

As a matter of fact
I didn't see any of us in Bedrock

come to think of it
I didn't see any of us flying around
diamond in the back
sunroof tops
diggin the solar scenes with the gangsta lean 
in those cute little space ships the Jetsons parked in their cute little space garage

now let me get this straight

we weren't there in the beginning
no sign of us in the future

just a minute...

I think I did see one of us for a second or two

"hey there Huggy Bear
with the cool ghetto walk
and lopsided afro hair"

and then there was

"I'm silly and stupid 
so I guess it's alright
I'm the lazy and shiftless
kid dynomite!"

and then I saw a few more of us every Saturday afternoon at the Fabian

they dressed funny
drove big Cadillacs with fuzzy dice and fur lined interiors
they drank hard
and slapped their women harder 
when they weren't turning tricks fast enough to keep their pockets lined with cash and coke

and it was all over
when they all took out guns and shot each other 
until no one was left

But these were my idols
Superfly
The Mack
Doodlebug
because they were what was given to me

but as soon as I had seen them
they disappeared
and I was left with the Bradys
and the Partridges
and the Dukes from Hazzard
with the Waltons down yonder

it was as if we were just commercials
no one really pays attention
turn the channel
or just shut the television off
altogether

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Charles2 says:

Potent message. WE were getting it done/revolution... wasn't televised... Then or Now/but "They" keep trying to robotize the numbskolls who are the equivalent of crash test dummies in the REAL live TEST

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mlowe5 says:

Powerfully deep awakening! metaphorical wordplay. Rhythmic pounding flow! There was also "The 10 Commandments" and now," Black Lightning!" TV/Movies stream their visioned history; let us continue to canvas ourstory in our awakening poetic streaming of truth's truth!. There're still Old Snakes still out there, Newphanter! ONE. Peace and Love

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