it sounds like rain then it
thunders then the lightening
strikes more than twice
there goes the cable and
the lights it's one of those
nights that feels like life
and I feel like getting high
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it sounds like rain then it
thunders then the lightening
strikes more than twice
there goes the cable and
the lights it's one of those
nights that feels like life
and I feel like getting high
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