Site rankRUBY

Awards

Karma 96,200 Blood stone

Poems snapshot

486Total poems
185,683Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
2Last 30 days
21Last 90 days
89Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

life 2 min read 512 views Dec 30, 2023

A Satisfied Customer

Twenty eight degrees
The whipping winter wind
Spanking my backside like daddy’s hands
When I used to cut up in church
During long ago Sunday morning services

So
We hip-hopped along Market Street

"No brother
I don’t need a Rolex today"

Smiling
Noticing the distinct sound and smell of salsa from side street vendors

A wave of the hand
A polite dismissal to the well dressed men making their final calls

"No brother
I ain’t got time to discuss the state of the black man today
But gimme a rain check"

Teenagers huddled by the bus stop
Bouncing to the beat of indistinguishable lyrics and bass lines

Thumbing through the racks of clothing
The music pumping so loudly
Price tags reverberating on my fingertips

"Special price today
You buy… you buy...!"

And we spent
And we bought

Eating at John’s Place
So full of soul food
Couldn’t tell our Wright Streets from our Frelinghuysens

But we did get everything we wanted

A variety of things to choose from
And the prices weren’t bad

Thirty one degrees

Hallelujah!

Our car is still where we left it

As she smiles
I watch for stray children  jay-running from between parked cars

Turning up the volume
I head towards home
A satisfied customer
Head bouncing
Hip-hoppin
Done my Chrismas shoppin’
In the Brick City

Comments (4)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in

love_supreme

Excellent write.

Read love_supreme's poems
Contest winner

Coalhouse

Dope

Read Coalhouse's poems
Contest winner

mlowe5

Thanks for the canvassing share, Newphanter. As I looked on, I found myself bobbing and weaving to the rhythmic flow. ONE. Peace and Love.

Read mlowe5's poems

Sassy

Amazing flow

Read Sassy's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free