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life 2 min read 375 views Aug 9, 2024

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ever been hit with the but of a gun it's no fun it'll have you stun like getting hit with a stun gun I cram to understand how one man let the other man get the upper hand the gun it had to be the gun one had one the other had none out gunned one had one the other had some send more guns more guns win wars flood the inner city and low income neighborhoods with more guns call of duty is childs play kids think guns are fun people fear guns hate to hear the sound of guns people scatter and run when someone has a gun no one stands still and risk getting killed I could be wrong one pop and I'm gone if you stay you on your own it's not about the shot it's not about the shooter it's about the gun EBG let's stiffen gun laws everyone agrees everyone applause meanwhile more shootings occur cop shoots someone someone shoots cop man shoots woman woman shoots man child shoots child people shoot people in places guns are not allowed someone shoots into a crowd kills someone's child EBG we need more gun control everyone agrees everyone applause still it's out of control send more guns fund the war are we there yet it feels like we got a long way to go to make it possible to believe we made it this far to surrender it all

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