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inpsirational 1 min read 380 views Nov 17, 2024

Breathless

"Breathless"                                                    

The Stars hold my heart breathless

as I gaze in the eyes of destiny

The pain numbs the days chores

The past is gone

a golden scar still remains as a badge to

The honor of my memories

kissing Forgotten Precious moments

as time ticks in my mind

the private road finally  aligns

the vast energy

the moon shines bright lighting my way

strings to the tune of my own heartbeat

pushing forward

learning to let life play out

while embracing my present

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mrmelody7

Such an exhilarating title with the cosmos back drop your always strong writing always impresses Lady K Good to see you still stroking the pen

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love_supreme

Very nice!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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