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The Immortal Wize
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mrmelody7 says: Agree with this I often think that myself that everyone is a robot Cant post on none of these browser get the 403 forbidden Still now and then go to couple poetry sites If I do try to post on this browser poem just disapper have a good one |
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The Immortal Wize says: @mrmelody7 Thanks for your unwavering support, I too sometimes get 503 |
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The Immortal Wize says: mrmelody7 Thanks for your unwavering support. My last reply was much longer but most of it was cut off it's some spooky stuff going on man, "eyes emoji" |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Wize I agree with your last reply somethin spooky goin on I go with the flow I dont have hang ups about it I just go somewhere Only recently able to pull this up on Chrome but still wont post Thanks a lot maybe its TRUMPITUS |
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The Immortal Wize says: Lol! It's damn sure something floating in the water. I wrote you damnly a whole paragraph but it all wouldn't post, I hope this goes through. I believe it's the same issue Mr. Lowe encountered wish I could help but I'm only the mayor I have no chair. Lol! |
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mrmelody7 says: Oh yeah I hear U yeah its the same as Mr Lowe happen some years ago too I did nothin then one day it just started back posting OK Mayor but unlike the Vibe staff U do reply back or say somethin |
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The Immortal Wize says: @mrmelody7 The admin has been very helpful and responsive in the past but things do happen I'm not sure what that is but it is unusual. |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize
Earth Corethe world ain't ready for a world changer a world changer ain't ready to change the world it's too much sh*t to deal with starting at the bottom to reach the top of the pile if the stench don't kill you the fall definitely will |
In The Wake Of SleepI see a broken pencil I have a impulse to fix it I look at it then start to see it differently maybe it's meant to be as it is if I try to fix it'll change the structure disturb its condition and existence I wouldn't be any different from the one who broke it |
Piethere was a time when you wanted your voice to be heard all you had to do is scream the noise wasn't as loud as it is now you need more than a bullhorn to speak over a crowd shots fired the world's too tired to run fatigue syndrome no matter how deep the hurt is it's too painful to cry when is the last time you seen the sky I mean where is the sky what happened to the sky do you remember the sky I heard a woman complain she can't buy pie I asked my mind why can't this woman purchase pie my mind stood still for a moment then said nevermind it's no business of mine but damn she really want that pie there was a time I would ask how much is the pie then pay for the pie I can't lie the first time in life I did not empathize I figured maybe she didn't need the pie she turned to me telepathically it's not hard to read begging eyes mine eyes said lady you're holding up the line I think she picked up on the thought I had in mind then started counting dollars in dimes to make a long wait ... |
Watermark (04292026)I think about the good times "the good times" there were good times not to say all the good times have passed away life is a song to those who love to sing along history taught me ABC was easy as 123 letters were written in cursive lines love didn't hurt when I had no idea it could it felt too good but time did what time does it grew up into something difficult to recognize bright smiles started to smudge deep whispers inside these legends don't die it's a flame that defies the flow the bend and the reshape of the current wave not every scream is asking to be saved some things were never meant for the grave what remains was never meant to be grieved loss is meant to mourn tho otherwise what are tears for though happiness is tearful not pretending to not hurt but refusing to let pain have the final word silence is a frequency stillness is a motion "was it all so simple then" is a lyrical question asking about memories had and good times shared that won't erase the joy we had nor w... |
Ink and Intention (04282026)
Be the spark Not in fire But in memory Let your craft open Let the hidden path Draw the bridge Through the surface Trace the moment We do not command We reflect and it replies Rise below and fall by the bond that does By the path the waters By the balance in which Until the quill fall from Everything almost said Breath breaks before Weigh the cost to believe too expensive to achieve Trust does not follow
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The Violet Flower (04082026)
Where everything around her has already given in She doesn’t call for help She learned not to disturb the peace There was a time she might have cried out in misery Before the silence taught her how to master the art of being still If you happen to see her But you would be partly right She's beautiful but not fragile at all While everything shatters around her she still stands In a place that has Forgotten mercy Forgotten kindness Forgotten the sound of laughter that didn’t break into violence Forgotten how to honor a queen Forgotten what it truly means to be a king Forgotten how to hold life Forgotten what it means Forgotten how to communicate<... |
Dark Callback (04062026)sometimes Heaven gets a call and the caller is me and I want to talk to someone I believe is there but I am told "there's no one here by that name" I hang up disappointed think for awhile then dial the other place thinking to myself there must be some kind of mistake the phone rings and rings and rings then the voicemail picks up at the tone I don't know what to say I know I don't want to leave my number I don't want the devil to call me back I drop the call then pause and decide to call Heaven back it rings one time then a dude name Peter answers the phone and says "didn't you call before" I said yeah! PEE-ter!” I need to know and before I could get all the words out Peter said "didn't I tell you there's no one here by that name at that point "PeeT" was getting on my last nerve I was perturb he didn't understand how things are done in the real world so I asked to speak to a manager a supervisor someone in charge “P’Tuh!” got offended like I was implying he wasn't doin... |
The SituationIt's out for delivery you can't track it nothing to indicate how many stops away you have stuff to do but you have to stay no matter how long it takes you have to wait it's nearing the end of the day you get a email it's been delayed not sure if it'll be today but it's still on the way you spent the whole day expecting it to arrive suddenly you're in a mood and no one knows why anger doesn't come with a disclaimer it arrives without warning escalation of unexpressed emotions in other words an explosion like playing with a gun with the safety off but really it's no one's fault |
Addicted To Hope (03042026)
double up the flow never fall off track snap on the snare when I paint these facts 808 pulse make the whole world crack mindset make moves like a chest piece chasing the first thought never second guess me built the sound proof now I manifest peace heartbeat knock on the wall of my chest it talks yeah it speaks it doesn't text every piece hits like a coded message I keep thinking the beat gone change but the thumps stay the same no pressure no stress got a wave to catch quick witted like a standup comedian handle hecklers like opps in the audience only break bread with those at the table passing the potatoes never lend never borrow is my moto collecting bricks like I'm building sh** stacking up virtual accomplishments in no rush to meet the goal watching prophecy unfold |
Between (04042026)The difference between a believer and a believer is a believer believes. |