A Sudden Exit
I got this from a writing challenge from another Poetry website. I hope it's cool that I can post this
As shoes are complaining,
YOU LEFT US BEHIND!!!,
just up against the wall
now that's out of line,
now, what was the rush?, and
the meaning of this?,
just running around barefoot,
just up and just split,
Did the house catch on fire?,
or Maybe a flood,
or you bump your pinky
with a painful thud?,
If you'd worn your shoes,
your feet would be secured,
I would've kept them snugged,
honestly I am sure,
NOW, HERE I AM ANGRY and
having the blues
I'd wished that you
hadn't bandoned your shoes
B.R.
Date: 8/31/2025

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