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just different 1 min read 326 views Aug 31, 2025

A Sudden Exit

 I got this from a writing challenge from another Poetry website. I hope it's cool that I can post this

 

 

As shoes are complaining,

YOU LEFT US BEHIND!!!,

just up against the wall

now that's out of line,

now, what was the rush?, and

the meaning of this?,

just running around barefoot,

just up and just split,

Did the house catch on fire?,

or Maybe a flood,

or you bump your pinky

with a painful thud?,

If you'd worn your shoes,

your feet would be secured,

I would've kept them snugged,

honestly I am sure,

NOW, HERE I AM ANGRY and

having the blues

I'd wished that you

hadn't bandoned your shoes

 

 

B.R.

Date: 8/31/2025

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