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life 2 min read 258 views Jan 31, 2026

Ash

The ever-falling stardust 

spins ...drifts, 

 

shimmies, shifts 

sparkling intermittently

 

reflecting background lights 

of distant stars

 

each dancing to its own beat

residual effects, moving on

 

acting upon seemingly random objects

in periodic shifts 

 

as gravimetric forces realign

Bending light towards a new dimension 

 

Arriving in a ripple of revolving space-time

As if, Your spirit climbing into mine

 

As the bubble envelopes us

we now move together

 

A warming glow lights our capsule

guided by will perhaps

 

A black hole opening near us

We swan dive into a dream state

 

flying high overlooking clouds

mountains which sing to the wind

 

and restless seas 

crashing into rocky shores

 

in a distant galaxy beyond ours

A neutron star silently implodes 

 

slips between folds of the universe

just as we sail over the rift

 

with a never before seen majesty

giving us a gift... sweet memories

 

we take as a sign

Beckoning us to drop in

 

So we get on down inside 

riding the wind

 

down the wall

into an energy well

 

drawn into becoming pilots

on course to the source

 

To the core of what we are

Asking in a dream state 

 

What are we here for …

if not to be free

 

Free? In order to be free …

you have to be right!

 

Get right, be free.

 

Our spirits sway gently 

in the haze of judgement

 

you judge yourselves

a voice felt rather than heard

 

that's absurd i say

where is the love?

 

love is the only freedom 

you may ever find

 

freedom is only 

a state of mind

 

what you see as love

 is not love

 

it is just devotion

love is blind...

 

 

C2

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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