Commas
See
"I got these commas........"
"And I don't know what to do"
"Now
They
Turning
White"
"I got these white "" commas."
They turned.
Is you under is you over
Stop all that surrendering
You
Never grab the lead
White commas
"Surrendering"
COMMAS
Sounds like a ghost story
Aa
O
O
The measurement of sound has been measured.
The measurement of harmony has been measured
Aa
O
O
The measurement of harmony has been measured
Re
Re
This is a remeasument
To GOD
I
O
O
Always
Knew I find GOD
A
O
O
GOD
My LORD
There's no distance I can't measure
I created
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Excellent write.
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""I got these commas........" is such a cool concept that you could do so much with, i like where you started to go with it, Nice!
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Different and Beautiful. What I thought about when I saw your title “Commas,” was what I always tell people I got in my bank account. The bank might say I got $3.54 cents, but I always say, I got commas in my bank account, so I don’t know what they are talking about. Our words are Powerful! So from a spiritual perspective, you gotta speak it into existence. I so love your version of this. Great write!
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