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Into the Lake(True Story)

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Pots filled with raindrops, the roof

leaked a lot, things really started to 

pour in, but regardless to what was

we didn't have the means to leave

 

Asthma showed its face, invading 

my lungs, holding up my air space, 

yet my good grace did what she

could to save me

 

She held me close, but the pain just

wouldn't let go, every time a breath 

got shorter I faded farther away, like 

I was off to my comportment in space

 

Voice flat as a tear on a line completing

its last free fall, I'd lay in her motherly

carriage almost down to my last

consummate

 

Wheezing, chest heaving and all,

I didn't die that day, no way I was

drowning in my own lake, I just

refused to let it be my fate

 

I never wished it away because

although I suffered I wasn't alone

My mother, my Queen, she was

always my safe space


—JG

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