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life 1 min read 17 views Nov 13, 2026

I'm Out

broke the glass out the window

to get a clear view forgot it gets

cold at night I'm shivering inside

I ask myself "why" while

the answer is still pending

in a financial loop still spending

a win feels like a loss cause

becase the of the laws that

govern I been trying to help

where help is needed 

applying enough pressure

to stop the bleeding  but 

the given don't stop the needing

the begging the pleading 

for more when it aint no more

to go around when the heart 

starts to pound can't drown

out the sound of ship going down

 

 

 

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