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romance 1 min read 12 views Nov 13, 2026

Invitation To Eclipse

Please excuse my way with words

—it’s not difficult,

but let me explain how I am

with you.

 

My every day is like the moon.

I still see you through the 

blue drapes of my bedroom,

though from a different view.

 

My every night is like nothing else, 

as you undress before me,

leaving an invitation to eclipse

with all of you.

 

—JG  ©2026

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