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first love 1 min read 480 views Nov 29, 2010

Moon, Stars, and Planets Aligned

Moon, Stars, and Planets Aligned

It was a night that seemed
All but ordinary
He picked her up saying
She looked extraordinary
She blushed and looked down
Then at him
They drove off not knowing
What was going on above them

It was when the moon, stars
And planets aligned
All the wrongs became right
And dead dreams came back to life
That’s the night they stared into
Each others beautiful eyes
And felt true love for
The very first time

They drove along the highway
Just talking the night away
She knew she had never
Felt this way
They parked and turned
The radio up all the way
How he felt he could
Never explain

It was when the moon, stars
And planets aligned
All the wrongs became right
And dead dreams came back to life
That’s the night they stared into
Each others beautiful eyes
And felt true love for
The very first time

The chemistry between them
Was undeniable
She looked at him and
Thought this isn’t possible
Then just as the moon, stars, and
Planets aligned
He leaned in and kissed her
For the first time

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