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first love 1 min read 600 views Aug 12, 2013

When I Feel

 when your not here
my heart goes cold
when your not here
the wind gives me a chilly heart
when your not here
eyes wander around me
when your not here
minds begin thinking one or another
and they start to wonder
when your not here
I have no love or guide
to show me who I can can
be nor to show me love as you do
when your not here
I feel like I'm the only
one here by myself I
walk the hallway full of kids
but it feels like the only I'm there
when your not here
I'm so cold
my heart as a dead soul
for goodness sakes I wish you
were here

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DallasCowgirl

Sad and beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poetry, sis. Hope to hear more from you!

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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