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lightness in the dark

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Love Strings(Revised)

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life

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my emotions bizarre

feel her impact from oceans afar

in fact

falter weak as if she was some altar

but truly the oneI seek

shines like a diamond, always

keeping me in trips with assignments

like the strip on a guitar neck, the fret

that rest in alignment

in your elect, it's like I'm

in perfect confinement

in blindness to all else around

any ground she travels is profound

all the exotic thoughts she inflict

and bring

are of deep strokes

like a pick on guitar strings

equipped and tuned at day for them special

songs in the night play

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