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A Fish Out of Water

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Swimming upstream to find a home of divinity

Whatever it may be, Buddhist, Muslim or Christianity

To many species to name, faith is always the same

All swimming to regain what is lost through life

Jumping over each other is a fight for survival

First one to the finish line is guaranteed revival

Swimming back to the waters that spawn me

Hoping to not be caught in the nets of worldly conformity

Performing the daily ritual of eating to stay alive

Always careful about what to devour

Eating the wrong food is sure to hasten your demise

The water is my life and to live is to keep swimming

Hoping, praying, forgiving and giving and believing

These are the waters that sustain life

I hope to not be plucked, snagged or poisoned
by iniquity, to die along the shores before reaching home,

like a fish out of water.......

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COMMENTS

 

Wize Dom says:

Life in Cali, lol I love the life in this poem.

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mrmelody7 says:

Lots of depth, you went deep in the water with this one, on the one
 

2b2b2 says:

Thanks kindly Wize.....Namaste
 

2b2b2 says:

Thanks mrmelody7......ONE
 

NternallyMe says:

Another Gem. It's greater than great and better than the best.. Well done.. Two thumbs up!! Thanks for sharing,. Chea

 

2b2b2 says:

Awww (grinning) thanks yet again!
 

NternallyMe says:

And you very well should grin.. Your work is art to me..

 

Charles2 says:

Soul deep
 

latin_lover says:

Excellent write.

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