As it rains
As I watch this movie play,
And as it rains,
And death dances in my head
It's possible to give away your heart,
And in the end it's crumbled,
Pieces are left on the floor scattered,
Thoughts fly through my head,
Of a beautiful life now to want to be dead.
Everything is in the eye of the beholder,
The fire now starts to smolder.
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Join free Log inThe Immortal Wize
Love it!
Read The Immortal Wize 's poemslove_supreme
There is a quiet resilience about this poem.
Read love_supreme's poemsArtist JoeMac
short, but striking. nice
Read Artist JoeMac's poemsPeaceSearcher
Thank you Wize Dom, latin_lover, and joemac619! I try to use only my true feelings so my writing can be deep and another person can feel the emotion as my words are read
Read PeaceSearcher's poemsNumber3
wow...thought enticing...provoking and excellent. Word Up!
Read Number3's poemsPeaceSearcher
Thank you Number3 I thought making it provoking would help me get out how the words needed to
Read PeaceSearcher's poemsmrmelody7
Yeah such is life, hangg in there as you learn you grow, why let someone else ruin your life, its short, enjoy it while you can
Read mrmelody7's poemsDallasCowgirl
Very beautiful
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