PeaceSearcher

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As it rains

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first love

As I watch this movie play,

And as it rains,

And death dances in my head

It's possible to give away your heart,

And in the end it's crumbled,

Pieces are left on the floor scattered,

Thoughts fly through my head,

Of a beautiful life now to want to be dead.

Everything is in the eye of the beholder,

The fire now starts to smolder.

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		The Immortal Wize says: Love it! poems by this commentor TPW Paper Napkin Poetry Full Course The Turn
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		PeaceSearcher says: Thank you Wize Dom, latin_lover, and joemac619! I try to use only my true feelings so my writing can be deep and another person can feel the emotion as my words are read poems by this commentor Most nights... Right this moment As it rains
		Number3 says: wow...thought enticing...provoking and excellent. Word Up! poems by this commentor 23 seconds of bliss.. What about tomorrows.. Burn The Ashes: Move on
		PeaceSearcher says: Thank you Number3 I thought making it provoking would help me get out how the words needed to poems by this commentor Right this moment Most nights... Rambling Depression
		mrmelody7 says: Yeah such is life, hangg in there as you learn you grow, why let someone else ruin your life, its short, enjoy it while you can poems by this commentor North East West South I See The Light-Billy Paul As Far As I Can See
		DallasCowgirl says: Very beautiful

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As it rains

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