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lightness in the dark
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Fyah

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I’m in another world another zone
 

You can’t come along I’m not goin home
 

I’m getting far away, away from here
 

So far into another, another year
 

Into a picture perfect atmosphere
 

I’m tired of feeling down
 

This is no way to feel
 

I need up from this down
 

A pick me up just won’t do
 

I need to get far away from you
 

From here that’s what I need to do
 

There is nothing that I want from you
 

More than I want you to let me go
 

When I’m with you I fall deeper into a stupor
 

I’m addicted I need treatment to recover
 

My nakedness I must confess I’ve been a mess
 

I need help to dress I guess I’m just depressed
 

Getting out of the neighborhood would do me some good
 

Far, far away from here into another dimension
 

Space, sphere and time zone I’m not going home 

 

 

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catmartan says:

Great write! I feel ya thanks for sharing!

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