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Surrendered

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 It took my life it was very thin

It took my happiness but drew me in

I was made to cry but it knew my dreams

It conjured a smile it made me scream

It forced my fear and my fate

I rendered to its blessed escape

It gave me sadness while it tore

There'd be a scar deep and sore

But out came the demon that sat on its throne

Leaving its mark but returning home

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ToothPick3 says:

Nicely done Brillant
 

Mrabc says:

Nice flow to this

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2b2b2 says:

Superb Write....thanks for sharing!
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The Immortal Wize says:

This flow is sick! love it

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