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life 2 min read 822 views Mar 27, 2014

inspired by YOU

I can't sleep

I keep thinking of her

and those thoughts are deep

I keep thinking of her

and where she ought to be

Hoping she's having beautiful thoughts of me

Although I know its to soon,

she's apart of me

So I don't give her a part of me

I give her all of me

Because like crack to pooky

or the sirens from Greek methodology

Her love is calling me

And it may not be love

but it is something

So I'm drawn to see what she's about without any regards for thee

consequences and/or repercussions

I will swim with puncture wounds

through shark infested water

I will crawl with the crocs draped in pork chops

through the swamps down in Florida

I will climb mt. Everett buck naked with sandals on

I will build a time machine travel back to the time between pre-historic to Babylon

Sacrifice a mastadon as an offering to you not to praise

just the ways in those days

to let someone know they've been placed .....

on a pedestal

I will do

any and everything

To give you

any and everything

To let her know

its not for show ,

She's not just any,

She's my everything

That's how she's supposed to be treated

I look at her smile like I need it

I look at her eyes like I see it

I see betrayal and heartbreak

Mental and physical abuse and heartbreak

Had to say it twice because to this day

the memories still makes her heart break

That was her journey

I want to be her destiny

That's why I look at her fetchingly

When we're laying chest to cheek

She's listening to my heartbeat

Like its music to her ear

Our breathings instinct

What did I do to get here

Whatever it was

It was inspired by you

to get here

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2b2b2

Excellent Work...thanks for sharing....ONE

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darylg44

Good writing. Nice piece

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TamaraD

Wow that was beautiful Love it!!!!

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