“I would Like to thank EVERYONE for all the love and comments that you all took time out to write. I really appreciate it all and I will return soon just need to take a break from the world and get in my own zone.. Only the real will understand what I mean. I love me some love and to return the same. Thank you all so much!!!!”

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life 1 min read 598 views May 21, 2014

Things Will Get Better!!!

Lil girl don't cry

Please dry your eyes

There's no reason

You made it to see the sunrise.

Pain is all you seem to know

So you have a uptight attuide you seem to show

You have a chance to make it somewhere and better your life

You need to get out the hood

To much

Just to many people being misunderstood

So you just lay and cry and wish you could die

You ask when will it be my finale goodbye

But don't cry I feel like things can't always go south

Things will get back the way things were or even improved

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The Immortal Wize

Very encouraging words.

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igotastory

Thank you Wize Dom for taking the time to comment I really appreciate it

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Excellent write

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