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life 1 min read 737 views May 28, 2014

What happen to the dayz

What happen to the dayz

Mothers with children

took visits to the park

Mothers chatting with each other

hooping on the court

dominos slammin,cards being tossed

boyz diving in the pool

when girls skirts flew up

they were wearing shorts

  What happen to the dayz

long walks to school

stop to pick up a friend

you would'nt dare be late

chastising from the neighbors

was the golden rule

  What happen to the dayz

when children loved the outdoors

parents would visit each other

while sitting on the porch

children running,laughing,playing was the scene

you see the ice cream truck coming

you start running behind its scream

  What happen to the dayz

men had such great respect

by nodding their heads,removing

their hats ,hiding their bottles

in brown paper sacks

  What happen to the dayz

children ran a race against the night

you would enter the door 

laughing inside, because you beat the street lights

 What happen to the dayz

did it just disappear into thin air

should we try find it again

or ignore it, as if we don't care.

 

 

 

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The Immortal Wize

Nice One!!!

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tretre

Man this took me back to my childhood. I remember thoses days. Loved the title. I agree with you What happend to those days. Beautiful work. Keep that pen movin CatMartan!

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2b2b2

Magnificent Capture.....most relevant....thanks for sharing!

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scash102

I can relate to this one, very nice poem.

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catmartan

THANKS TO ALL OF YOU, GREATLY APPRECIATED !

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love_supreme

MIssed those days so I feel you.

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